Animations from uBiCrAy(Update from 16.05.2010)

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Animations from uBiCrAy(Update from 16.05.2010)

Postby uBiCrAy on Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:21 pm

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This is my first animation.

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This is really poor animation,for testing running and walking

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And this is my new one,i'll update it as soon as possible

Enjoy and pls RATE
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy

Postby Monk on Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:25 pm

Very glad to see animations from you! Very good for your first! Try to work on walking, easing, and physics. Also the jump probably should have had a bit more build up to it, and the reaction could use some work. All in all, it is good.
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy

Postby DarkFlame on Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:05 pm

That is really good for your first anim!
The jump should have more of a charge and it should be slightly higher framerate to make it smoother, but it looks pretty good otherwise!
I like the walk, and the overall body positions are pretty good.
Good Job!
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy

Postby Haidra on Mon Jun 01, 2009 2:27 pm

Wow! That's good for your first anim. You could be very good if you work on easing, the position of people, and a couple more. Also, a higher frame rate and smaller movements could make your anim look really smooth.
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy

Postby Hoboapple on Mon Jun 01, 2009 4:05 pm

Your skills are poor, but that's normal for the first, so I don't know which to check. Try to make it look more like he's falling. It seemed like he went higher up than he came down.
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy

Postby uBiCrAy on Tue Jun 02, 2009 10:32 am

Thans to everyone who posted and\or will post.
i have readed every post and payed attention.with new suggestions,i have maked an remake.i didn't had many time.but i did what i can.here it is:
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to be continued


I decided to make it as movie.i'll continue to animate when i can.
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy

Postby Nate on Tue Jun 02, 2009 5:37 pm

Not bad, I haven't seen you in a while. Good one for your first. :thumbup: Again, you've got room for improvement, so I'm anxiously awaiting anims with totally mastered skills on hand.
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy

Postby Hoboapple on Tue Jun 02, 2009 6:44 pm

Make more frames of where he goes into the hole, because it seemed like he was landing on the other guy, then all of a sudden hanging.
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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy(Edited in 07.07.09)

Postby uBiCrAy on Mon Jul 06, 2009 3:10 pm

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Re: Animations from uBiCrAy(Edited in 07.07.09)

Postby Hoboapple on Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:19 pm

The walking was okay. Just seemed a little unnatural. Maybe slow it down a little. Before he jumped, he should have bent more. It looked like he was flying. He also landed funny. It would've made him fall backward, not forward.
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